History+Poems,+Raps,+and+Chants

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[|The Qin and the Han]( Ben and Rex)

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The lyrics does not fit with the sound, NO talking in the rap.- I agree with Tommy, REX ROCK Max The lyrics is good. But why do you talking on the rap? Rex, in the future i really think u gonna be a professional rapper.- Tommy Chau : Your rap is cool but the first time i listen i think it is a poem but when i listen to Rex so i know it is a Rap. Rex like a rapper than Bex. I think you have a good song or rap but it need to be rhyme. When you reading rap, you just keep going and never stop no matter what happen.- Andy Phuc: I like the lyric and rap, but not the "Oh men, I can't do it"
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 * Ben, next time I think you should be more comfortable. Rex, you ROCK !!! Kelly :D**
 * Mickey: i think is really good REX rap really good but ben i thin k you need to have more rhymes and speak a little slowlier so that everyone can hear it **

[|Pericles] (Ray and Daily) (Pericles-Jaysean down down) listen along with pericles mp3 media type="file" key="Pericles.mp3" width="240" height="20"


 * __Comments:__ Ray and Daily, i love your lyrics it good, i like the opening part, it great i want to listen again, and again. What that song name Ray or Daily, so i can listen it :D. (Roo) the rhyme sound really great, but the voice is too high for me personally so u can low the volume down a little bit :D. (ben) i like the song and the lyric, but why the voice in the song so different **


 * Phuc: The voice isn't clear but the lyric is great./ **


 * Max: the voice isn't clear. **
 * I like your lyrics but I can't really hear what you guys are singing. -Tommy **
 * Chau : I like your song and your lyric but the voice is not clear. **
 * I think your lyrics is perfect, the voice is cool too. But it's not very clear !!! If there's no lyrics, people will have hard time to understand. Kelly :D**

Chau and Tommy [|The Roman Republic]

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media type="file" key="The Roman Republic.mp3" width="240" height="20" Rex: Another job well done guys! I love it!!!!!! ! Andy: I think you guys have a good poem but it have to be rhyme.. Great JOB!!!!
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Mickey, Jacob, and Steve Mesopotamia [|Lyrics] media type="file" key="mesopotamia.mp3" width="240" height="20" **Daily: too big sounds and needs to be clear, but, the partnership of voices are good.**
 * I like the part when you were talking and then it turns to rap. That's very cool and no one do they same like you guys so it's very speacial.**
 * __Comments:__ They needs to improve on the timing of the when to say,I enjoyed the rapper of the participation also, the teamwork of the voice,the interesting part was the rapping ilke a following of the script in additionally, the part when the timing of mickey to steve rap that have alot of emotions. (Roo) Need to use more metaphor and simile, try to balancing the  **
 * person singing not only Jacob **
 * I like when Mickey and Steve rap, it's cool. Jacob part is good too because he have a good voice and it's loud.**

Andy and Max [|The Attacking of Europe] media type="file" key="the attacking of europe.mp3" width="240" height="20" The lyrics are really good. But can you sing louder so we can hear it easily. :P Chau : I like your lyric, it very good. I think you sing louder, too. Rex: The lyrics of the song is fantastic! The volume of your project is amazingly awesome! Your project is by far the best! (ben) I like your song and your lyric but I don't like your last sentence
 * __Comments:__ (Steve) Andy & Max, nice voice man, good lyric, but can you sing bigger so i can hear the interesting part please, thank you :D **

Roo and Choi [|Christianity]

media type="file" key="christianity.mp3" width="240" height="20" wait.. Muslim don’t forget to pray 5 times a day.
 * __Comments:__ ** I like you guys singing, i like the ending,

if your are Christian remember to go to the church on Sunday! good rhymes, and funny (Ray)

Andy: You guys have a good song but i think CHOi need to speak louder.... GREAT JOB : Phuc: I like the rhyme, it's great Daily: it was very good and clearly good voices but, needs a timing of the voice.
 * (steve) Roo & Choi i like the last part of your song it great, and may be you can make more interesting OK. Nice job ** ;)

Kelly and Phuc

[|World War One]

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 * __Comments: ( it;s to small so i cannot hear Cech and Kell voice) ( MAX)__ **

**__Use more figurative language-Choi.__** (Roo) just need more Metaphor and simile. Rex: The volume of your project is a little bit too small. The song is pretty good. (ben) I can't hear what your group say

Daily: needs to be speak clear and needs a metaphors and similies.but, it is really good like a partnership.